Can you identify the error(s) in this conclusion?
Despite the error(s), does it look like a good conclusion?
Notice the author indents before beginning the conclusion.
Based on the conclusion, what discourse type was used in this essay?
What was the dominant device/strategy?
Justify your answers.
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The Conclusion
ReplyDeleteNow we are at the end of the essay—the final paragraph a.k.a. the conclusion.
This should just be one short paragraph that echoes your introduction and brings the reader full-circle.
A conclusion should
• stress the importance of the thesis statement,
• give the essay a sense of completeness, and
• leave a final impression on the reader.
I like the way E-how puts it: While a conclusion is often shorter than other paragraphs in the essay, it is very vital to the essay's success. It restates the essay's main points and tells the reader what to think or understand about the ideas presented in the essay. Understanding a conclusion's purpose, significance and features is essential to writing an effective conclusion.
Transitional Words: Words that could help you begin you conclusion other than the mundane “In conclusion” or “To conclude”:
ReplyDelete• It is therefore obvious or evident
• Evidently
• Therefore
• As a result
• Consequently
• Without a doubt
• Clearly
• Hence
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You can also write another conclusion for the campaign exam essay.
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